October Girl

"Well can I at least try?" Dante asked getting quiet annoyed himself. She poked him in the chest with a dangered finger. "Don't even try. I'm perfectly fine without a ...

"It means... I guess I'll be staying with you." Dante said making eye contact with her, her cheeks turned pink. He was making her blush. He smiled inside but kept ...

**Just go along with this post. I don't want her to find out he's a cat just yet.** Dante was sitting on Dawn's living room couch, he'd shifted last night ...

*Thank God!* Dante heard the hallelujah chorus break out in his own ears. He slowly acted like he was licking his paw then went off track and began to lick ...

Dante had to get away from those people. They knew exactly who he was and how he was doing it. He found a girl walking on the street and began ...

Hey there SakuraFallsSweetly♥ I'll be another one of your reviewers. First off by saying your story was OK but it wasn't GREAT! But here's why. We have no idea what ...

Ello ^_^ I'm Max and I just wanted to say nice poem. I felt like the 8th stanza was a bit lacking, but then again that's just me. I think ...

7/10 that was pretty good :)

Hey guys it's me, Max 8) and this is the beginning of Bitten- you can still read the sneek peek but you don't have to. I'd love it if I ...

Wow Darling, I couldn't have written it better myself. It's very good and so discriptive-I could imagine everything. Like the first one to critique this I'm not sure if it's ...

Wow, girl. Simply wow I love it! :D I wasn't actually expecting Carl to be the visitor. But it still works. I'm sorry I didn't read it ASAP I have ...

Dang girl! This is so exciting. I told you I'd be here every step of the way. Now, I'd just like to point out a couple of things since I've ...

well I'm taking a break from YWS.

**sorry I don't know what to write. Maybe we could start a new one?**

Phoenix liked mischeif but right now he couldn't draw attention to himself in any type of shape or form. "Uh I can't-" "Oh c'mon! Live a little." The one named ...